Peter Verzijl
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1000 words a week – chapter 6 – Revision and addition
21-04-2013
“Dear readers, Before I start on the story of today I want to thank those who gave me feedback! I really appreciate it, and although I did not take the time to correct last entry, I did however address the most pressing point I got from you guys. The main thing you guys noted was the ending from last episode. Which was incredibly forced and had no buildup. Today I have tried to fix that by rewriting that part. I hope that you think this version is better. In addition to the revision, I also wrote the next part in the story about the couriers. This time, our protagonist searches for help.
Also I want to tell you guys a little secret. I am working on my own webpage on which people can give feedback without having to create an account. I heard that is a bit of an obstruction to posting something. I hope I can find the time to switch next week, but the next quarter is also starting. I guess we will see. For now, I hope you’ll have a blast reading the next part in the story. Greetings, Peter Verzijl”